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Hi Ananya Well done on describing a place that is your Hawaiki. It sounds busy and happy and peaceful all at once. It's great to hear you are enjoying doing your school work from home. What did you find easy, and what was difficult about this writing?
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Hi Ananya
ReplyDeleteWell done on describing a place that is your Hawaiki. It sounds busy and happy and peaceful all at once. It's great to hear you are enjoying doing your school work from home. What did you find easy, and what was difficult about this writing?
i think it was hard to describe what its like there and easy to write the sentences
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