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Wednesday, November 10, 2021

Blue poem

1 comment:

  1. You have some great similes. I like the way you described blue feeling like soft horse fluff. I wonder if there are other adjectives you can add to give more detail - how can you describe the beach, or flowers, or bubblegum?

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