Dear Grinch,
I really would like to change your mind and feelings about Christmas.
Christmas isn't about getting presents it's about friends and family getting together.If you think your going to stay sad and not happy.That will change if you spend Christmas in who-ville.
from Ananya
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Great effort Ananya. Can you please re-read it to check that your writing makes sense. Also don't forget that your name deserves a capital letter!
ReplyDeleteI like how you suggested that the Grinch could be happy and change what he thought about Christmas
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